Andrew Bolt’s editorial from the Herald Sun, March 3rd 2003, addresses conservative people concerned with Parliament. He argues critically and forcefully against Kirstie Marshall’s rights to breastfeed her 11-day-old baby Charlotte, in State Parliament. In contrast the editorial taken from The Age February 28th 2003, addresses women or people concerned with women’s rights. They argue factually and formally for the rights of family friendly working environments. ] Andrew Bolt begins forcefully by implying that he would know everything “noticed four entirely predictable things”.
His direct and frank assertion is unambiguous. In order to convince his audience to side with him, Andrew repeatedly uses personal stance “I”, “I’d” in his writing. He makes his audience believe that if babies were bought into Parliament, women cannot concentrate, so the consequence being that the Government would be under threat. Men however are more serious, therefore not needing women to make decisions as they don’t take government seriously. Andrew cleverly inserts a patronising tone “sweetly”, “magical”, “and no wonder” to convince his audience that men are more superior in such a serious workplace.
This is also evident in the heading when we see his patronising tone “There’s a time and place for breastfeeding” where Andrew appears to be a wise old man, putting across that what he says really is right. Throughout the piece we mainly hear echoing that men are more trustworthy to do this job as women don’t belong to such a serious atmosphere. He clearly separates women and men, as women are apparently more “besotted” with children. Bolt uses rhetorical questions in a condescending tone again to repeat his argument against Kirstie Marshall being able to breastfeed in Parliament “Is this opposition now on the ball? , “Is the Government on the job? “.
His patronising tone depicts his assumption that MP Kirstie Marshall is not doing her job “I cant see how women can fully concentrate on her work just a week or two after giving birth to her first baby” and again with “don’t bother asking Marshall about what went on and why” as he shows what he thinks is his superiority as he unfairly comments on Marshall. Conversely, we see that The Age editorial takes a more dramatic approach, setting an image for the readers. There is a strong feminine voice throughout the whole editorial, making it appeal more to the women of today.
The writer uses a very balanced sentence structure giving it a factually and sophisticated feel “Ms Marshall said she was not trying to make a statement, and that she did not expect the parliamentary rules to be bent for her. But by acting unselfconsciously she did make a statement, and the rules should be bent for her” also whilst sending her strong argument across. However not only does the writer speak formally, they also send off a patronising and opinionated tone “we hope common sense prevails and that Charlotte is allowed to make periodic appearances in the assembly if her feeding schedule demands.
The writer conveys their opinion in a righteous manner, using language to echo conflicting responsibilities throughout their piece. The writer cleverly combines an argument for family friendly workplace to be introduced into everyday life as today it is more common for women to be working instead of staying home. In conclusion, Andrew Bolt uses forceful and critical language to argue that Kirstie Marshall doesn’t have the right to breastfeed baby Charlotte in State Parliament.
Using rhetorical questions and patronising phrases he is able to depict that women are not suited to Government as it is better suited to the more sophisticated and serious men who do not get besotted with babies. However in stark contrast we see that The Age editorial uses a more sophisticated and formal approach comprising of balanced sentence structures to send a more feminist approach to the topic. We can see that their main argument is to combine a family friendly workplace into everyday life as today it is more common sense as a lot more women are working instead of staying home.